I really love this series. I have been following it for quite a while, I think the characters are original as well as the jokes. Now that you have redone the animation, I feel its just time to really make a season where one plot overhangs the entire show. I think it would really make this show more enjoyable and make everyone else want more for the next one because of its quality ( which is very good ) .
Really hope you consider my opinion :D
HmmmMMM... Now that's an interesting idea! I wonder if I could create an arc that went a whole season?
You know what, Yuotta, you've just given me something to very seriously think about! You might have changed the future for FtM, I'm not sure! I'm going to really honestly consider something like that...
Music stood out the most!
Nice job here style wise. The animation was nice too and it seems like you will be doing this for a while so it will keep improving! The music set the tone for this show quite nicely and is one of the best things you have going for it. I do suggest when an normal episode comes out it actually goes somewhere...
That was so inspiring, considering I watched half of it be made. So cool, I just can't say anything else except :
Waited all summer!
And I am so happy I did. Seriously, why hasn't any company purchased this show yet? It's amazing. The only reason I give it a 9 is because it took a while to come out!
It has a chance. I feel like it could be made much faster, at a shorter time length per episode. I think if an episode with an actual plot could come out per or bi weekly that would be excellent.
The art is fine, the story is fine, the voice work needs to be slightly improved. Mic quality especially on Slinks...
Keep at it.
Although I saw the same freaking background character mosieing his way around Karryon at least 5 times!!
yeah, i call him 'walking man' and trust me, his appearances are actually intentional. he's inthe first and you'll see him for a long time to come.
This was awesome!
This will only get better and better!
Looking forward to see how the next episode comes out.
Alright, well congratulations you have me hooked on your story and I would really really like to see more. However I hope you take my review into consideration because I only hope this gets better and better! Ok here we go:
Writing: The one thing I enjoy most about this particular series so far is the writing is very well done, and it keeps it entertaining ( don't slack behind! ) Keep the writing fresh.
Voice work: Was fine, however still think some of your voice actors should use a better mic!
Art: Art was there, really well done and you will just keep getting better and better at it.
Animation: Here is where it needs touching up. I like the animation in all four of these so far, however it feels as if you are kind of rushing? I guess you could say... I say that because too me it looks like every clip needs more "In-Betweens" then it has, to make the motion more fluid.
Another big thing is that I noticed were two scenes.
The Silhouetting scene and the chef scene.
The silhouetting was done fine, just their needed to be more background art to really to pull of that look. When the chefs came out at first, I thought that this film was unfinished or lagging. It was the same clip about 6 times... try to switch it up and not totally cheat your animation!
But seriously, please keep making more! This really can be good!
Art was there. Voices, story and plot weren't. Seriously, if this is meant to be funny then sure good job. If this is meant to be a story than it needs more work, and voice actors rather than high squealing pitch. I'm just saying my opinion because I could barley understand what the character was saying.
From an animation perspective, it could be really good man! It seems interesting enough to actually have a backbone to it. So, do what you want with it but that's my review.
Welcome back to the wonderful world of animation!
Thank you for making sweet entertainment for viewers. I enjoyed this episode a lot but it feels to me like you are trying too hard to make this a funny cartoon about an unquestionable hero... well I like your more serious stuff because your art is spectacular! Too me this seems like it would be a really nice serious film, a movie if you will that has a nice story too it - that's why it gets a 9/10
But it gets a 5/5 because the animating was right on the money. The lip sync was spot on, and I cannot wait to see a bigger action scene.
Good on ya mate!
thanks heaps man. and yeah i intend to keep it pretty action based, i just couldnt when he didnt have a reason and what not. and your right, the comedy could improve, that will come with time as i grow into it you know.
thanks for the critique :D
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