Yuotta's movie Reviews on Newgrounds

[FtM: It's All Relative]

I really love this series. I have been following it for quite a while, I think the characters are original as well as the jokes. Now that you have redone the animation, I feel its just time to really make a season where one plot overhangs the entire show. I think it would really make this show more enjoyable and make everyone else want more for the next one because of its quality ( which is very good ) .

Really hope you consider my opinion :D

JKR responds:

HmmmMMM... Now that's an interesting idea! I wonder if I could create an arc that went a whole season?

You know what, Yuotta, you've just given me something to very seriously think about! You might have changed the future for FtM, I'm not sure! I'm going to really honestly consider something like that...

[LARRY episode 1.5]

Nice one

Although I saw the same freaking background character mosieing his way around Karryon at least 5 times!!

Jazza responds:

yeah, i call him 'walking man' and trust me, his appearances are actually intentional. he's inthe first and you'll see him for a long time to come.

[LARRY episode 1]

Honestly

Welcome back to the wonderful world of animation!

Thank you for making sweet entertainment for viewers. I enjoyed this episode a lot but it feels to me like you are trying too hard to make this a funny cartoon about an unquestionable hero... well I like your more serious stuff because your art is spectacular! Too me this seems like it would be a really nice serious film, a movie if you will that has a nice story too it - that's why it gets a 9/10

But it gets a 5/5 because the animating was right on the money. The lip sync was spot on, and I cannot wait to see a bigger action scene.

Good on ya mate!

Jazza responds:

thanks heaps man. and yeah i intend to keep it pretty action based, i just couldnt when he didnt have a reason and what not. and your right, the comedy could improve, that will come with time as i grow into it you know.

thanks for the critique :D

[Takuto: Chapter 1]

Well

The storytelling really shines here and if you keep this up you are really going to need to make sure it stays on top. Since this is more like watching an animatic then an animation - if you ever consider turning this into an animation I might be able to help you out - a lot.

Keep at it!

MarkHansAvon responds:

Thanks for the feedback Yuotta. :-)

I'm going to go for 4 years before I color it hopefully, but first and foremost let's see if I can get to Chapter 13 in 13 weeks.

[SKATER V2 Episode: 05]

You are in a great style zone.

It was enjoyable. It almost seems like you guys are moving away from skateboarding.

MarcyVF responds:

Haha, well the series isn't actually about skating, it's about the skaters!